Request for concrit on new dS vid

[revbiscuit.livejournal.com]

Can you help? I would like some feedback on a vid I have made. Specifically, I would like to know all that's wrong with it.

I'm trying to learn more about vidding, and before I attempt another one I would be ever so grateful if anyone could point out obvious pitfalls or stupid things I have done with this one. Even if due South is not your fandom, if you have some time to spare I would be really grateful if you could go take a look and tell me what's what.

Music: Learning to Fly by Tom Petty & the Heartbreakers.
Fandom: due South - Spoilers for the whole show.
Pairing: F/K, F&V friendship.
Summary: A journey of discovery (with bizarre stunts).

The current links to download a copy or watch it on imeem are here on my journal, and when you're done you can either drop a comment on that entry or email me at the livejournal address (revbiscuit at lj dot com). I can assure you I have no ego to bruise. All help will be gratefully received.

Thank you.