Firefly/Serenity - Simon/River - "Wires" by Athlete

[obsessive24.livejournal.com]

Wires
Fandom: Firefly/Serenity
Song/Artist: Wires by Athlete
Duration: 4:17 minutes

Summary: Simon. River. Love. Simon POV, optional crazy space incest.
Spoilers: Firefly and Serenity. Contains audio from the R. Tam Sessions.

Zipped WMV 10.24MB, zipped MPEG-1 35.22MB.

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Comments

[river-boat.livejournal.com]

I really liked this. The bit that really drew me in was the bridge section starting at 2:40, the shift to the happier, more uplifing clips was done really nicely - I found it really touching. Then coming out of the bridge, it kept on flying until the end. I liked the quick cuts around 3:10 and then the parallels you drew between the two of them helping and avenging the other. And nice ending too, going back to the start of their Firefly story on the "you would never know" lyric. Which reminds me of another of my favourite bits: an earlier occurence of that same lyric, where you ever so slightly faded a blue-tinged River-is-experimented-on scene over the top of River dancing - I really liked the subtelty of it.

Bravo!

[obsessive24.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much for your detailed feedback, I really appreciate it! The "you would never know" bit with the overlay is a personal favourite bit, so I'm really happy you mentioned it in particular.