A few weeks ago I offered to give some feedback on 3 vids. This is the first piece of feedback I'm giving.
This particular piece will also debate some of the issues raised by the vid - namely those of the authorial intention of vidders, the importance of context, the relationship between vid and audience, the question of why different people vid and more!
Note for Brits: From this moment on, when this article refers to "football" it is the American Football variant rather than the beautiful game.
Vid: "Boom" by
kitakatzzSong: "Boom" by P.O.D
Fandom: Stargate Atlantis (a fandom I know absolutely
nothing about, so bear that in mind)
This vid is a perfect vid to start off this foray into spurious acts of feedback charity. For several reasons, in fact. First, there are simple things to improve upon, so advice on editing methods and technicalities are sure to be useful. Second the vidder is keen about making vids and that's a good thing. Third, it allows me to elucidate about some of the interesting meta-ponderings that this sort of vid inspires which makes it a useful thing for other readers too. What I don't know presently is how much the vidder is keen to learn or how much further they want to take their hobby. I guess what it comes down to is whether this vidder will want to move onto more mature and involved works or whether they are happy making vids of a similar nature with perhaps some improved editing. I'm going to offer advice the way I see it and whatever the vidder wishes to do with this advice is fine by me.
( Enter, Evil Critic )( Boom as simple action entertainment with comic undertones and character love. )( Using Simple Narrative Tricks )( Stuck in the fandom? )( What is it saying? Is it saying what you want it to say? ) And there's the rub.
( Blood from a stone. )( Making things AWSM )( Technicalities and general editing practices )Is all this worth it?Precision editing can be a long, arduous process filled with pain - but the end result can be very satisfying. It all depends on what you want from vidding. From a certain point of view, Boom is actually a perfect vid. It plays around with some fun footage, features good character moments and uses a song the vidder likes. As a personal project, Boom does what the vidder wanted. Who could ask for more? If the vidder wanted to go further there are nearly limitless additional options. Some vidders like the challenge and results that complex, precisely composed vids can offer but each person enters this hobby for a different reason. Other vidders like to make vids that appeal to fandom in general and will work hard to make their vids appeal to the greatest number of people. I know vidders who make vids just for other vidders. It all depends on what you want from the hobby. Watch your shows, listen to your music, make your vids, enjoy them and be proud.
kitakatzz: I hope you find some of this discussion useful. If you want to ask me about any particular aspects of what I've said or about other parts of your video then feel free to ask.
@everyone else: Feel free to comment on any of the ideas presented here. The whole point of this kind of feedback is to get people talking about these basic issues and thinking about how they relate to vids and vid fandom.